photray94's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Runaway Hardstyle Remix]

Loved it.

I'd say this is one of the better remixes of any soundtrack on NG, and one of your best audio tracks.

zenodio responds:

Thank you very much, i knew that people loved the runaway song, and then i think why not make an awesome remix of an awesome song. i knew it would be good but i didnt knew that people would love it :D thank you very much :D :D :D

[Bad Blood with Badman!]

Dull.

I'm confused how this has gotten such good ratings. It was very, very repetitive, add some more instruments or riffs. It was way too short to put any justice to this song. TERRIBLE ENDING, it was just 5 seconds of nothing.

Druids-Warcry responds:

eh ok, thats your view homie, reall this was new to me, and You can thank the one and only Bad-Man-Incorporated (seen as review below) for this "Repetitive and Dull" Track. i thought for what we did as a Demo, it was hot. but i can see you took it a little too far, and im sure your confused on NG how things for on Rating. you can vote

0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 on any track the more people give you good score is good then the people must like it.

I do admire how you Voiced what you had to say, even tho you dont like this song you told me, i respect that. but a word on how to make it better would have been nice.

[The Origin of Disease]

Great job!

The beast needs a voice guys. Also, proper good job m8 on the bass, it was actually possible to hear it! Though, I didn't really enjoy the bass line itself, it was just nice to hear it.

MindOverMatt responds:

Thanks pal!

[Chilled Out Tecno]

Whoa whoa whoa, slow down there mister.

The song came outta the box way to fast. All the instruments were playing from the very start, there wasn't even a build up.

mariomusicmaker1 responds:

yea i know its a loop :P
but i will be using this set up to make an ambiant song around 2 minutes long, if you want ill give you a shout when finished, * if i remember.
but thanks for the review :D

[Get Wizard [Electro]]

Needs work.

The bass throughout the entire song is VERY misplaced. Maybe add in some glitched drums, that'll add to the addictiveness of the piece. The synth that comes in around 1:25 should be introduced earlier. The initial bass line that came in at about 0:16 was nice, it really made me want to listen to the song more, and was slightly adrenaline pumping - which is what electronica SHOULD do. So nice job on that.

Keep trying,
Pho

Sythec responds:

Yups!

[On the wave]

Somewhat annoying.

The D that kept droning through the piece became very annoying, try to change the melody line up a bit. And if you're going to make a loop, don't have it fade over, that's just asking for the song to grow corny in a video game and people realize it is a loop. Work on it looping over well.

KJLOPIK2007 responds:

Thanks I'll keep that in mind =]

[Lalala. Techno]

Too short.

The song was way to short to even begin to critique. Although, if this was the beginning of a song, I'd say: Start with the bass, not the lead. Also, the lead and bass isn't quite enough to hold a song together, add some drums or something. I too am just trying to start using FL Studio (8) so don't feel bad, this was good for a first try. Don't forget making a longer song is as easy as repeating one beat with almost negligible variations.

jkvjkah responds:

thankyou. your review is very helpful and i shall take in your advice.

[(NUB)Time To Let Go-beta-]

Serene, indeed.

9/10, I think a few improvements here and there could be made but really it was spot on, try extending the length to keep the listener interested.

Now, set aside the serenity, if you really want to go for something jaw dropping, occasionally, add a few well placed crunchy guitar chords, that last maybe two beats, you know like a "dun dun". It's kinda hard to explain over a review, I hope you understand.

Great job!

nubbinownz responds:

no no, I kind of have an idea of what you mean. And to be absolutely honest I was contemplating it. But I couldn't seem to find a rhythm that would fit.
thank you though! :D

[Nubbin Be Freestylin!]

The lyrics. Yes.

I really enjoyed the song. The lyrics were great for freestyling. -2 stars for the silence, though I do understand that things happen - like your friend calling ur roomate... Nice to hear rap, a change from your techno/trance.

nubbinownz responds:

heheh this was all for fun, and I'm glad that you enjoyed it haha; D

[(NUB) Flight of Your Life]

HOT DAMN!

Without a doubt nubbinownz, you're my favorite author on NG. I could totally see this score being used on one of them old 8 bit arcade plane shooter games.

nubbinownz responds:

favorite ? <3 awwww I feel so squishy inside right now. Thank you !