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[[ f ] Taking a Chance]

Very nice.

Great loop Mack! The beat was amazing and the synth was well placed, though a few REALLY loud bass noises would've put the icing on the cake. If this were a normal audio track and not a loop you'd have a ten BUT because it IS a loop, the song did not loop over well for the 2 seconds of silence from 1:20-1:22. If you ever consider putting revisions into this that's all I could imagine would need revising.

I'm impressed,
Pho

flashmac responds:

Well the only reason I made it short was because it's an instrumental and it doesn't change much so I didn't want people to get bored with it. I meant to mark it as a song but i guess I messed up haha. I guess I can make it longer or something. Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it :D

[[TMM43]Love the DJ]

Needs more spice.

Don't get me wrong DJ Pinke, this song was great. But you DO know what trance is, and the effect it should bring to the listener? Trance almost always should be pumping the adrenaline of the listener, and be progressive. I found this agressive with far too many instruments, so get that bass louder and have fun with a lead, not multiple tracks anyone can barely keep track of.

I was feeling more ambient/techno here.

Overall good job though man.

[(WF1)/Tell Astral Feelings]

Whoa.

This music is phenomenal. Why 9/10? You need to make it longer :]

wyldfyre1 responds:

=) Thanks for the review for sure.

[Runaway Hardstyle Remix]

Loved it.

I'd say this is one of the better remixes of any soundtrack on NG, and one of your best audio tracks.

zenodio responds:

Thank you very much, i knew that people loved the runaway song, and then i think why not make an awesome remix of an awesome song. i knew it would be good but i didnt knew that people would love it :D thank you very much :D :D :D

[Bad Blood with Badman!]

Dull.

I'm confused how this has gotten such good ratings. It was very, very repetitive, add some more instruments or riffs. It was way too short to put any justice to this song. TERRIBLE ENDING, it was just 5 seconds of nothing.

Druids-Warcry responds:

eh ok, thats your view homie, reall this was new to me, and You can thank the one and only Bad-Man-Incorporated (seen as review below) for this "Repetitive and Dull" Track. i thought for what we did as a Demo, it was hot. but i can see you took it a little too far, and im sure your confused on NG how things for on Rating. you can vote

0 l 1 l 2 l 3 l 4 l 5 on any track the more people give you good score is good then the people must like it.

I do admire how you Voiced what you had to say, even tho you dont like this song you told me, i respect that. but a word on how to make it better would have been nice.

[The Origin of Disease]

Great job!

The beast needs a voice guys. Also, proper good job m8 on the bass, it was actually possible to hear it! Though, I didn't really enjoy the bass line itself, it was just nice to hear it.

MindOverMatt responds:

Thanks pal!

[Chilled Out Tecno]

Whoa whoa whoa, slow down there mister.

The song came outta the box way to fast. All the instruments were playing from the very start, there wasn't even a build up.

mariomusicmaker1 responds:

yea i know its a loop :P
but i will be using this set up to make an ambiant song around 2 minutes long, if you want ill give you a shout when finished, * if i remember.
but thanks for the review :D

[Get Wizard [Electro]]

Needs work.

The bass throughout the entire song is VERY misplaced. Maybe add in some glitched drums, that'll add to the addictiveness of the piece. The synth that comes in around 1:25 should be introduced earlier. The initial bass line that came in at about 0:16 was nice, it really made me want to listen to the song more, and was slightly adrenaline pumping - which is what electronica SHOULD do. So nice job on that.

Keep trying,
Pho

Sythec responds:

Yups!

[On the wave]

Somewhat annoying.

The D that kept droning through the piece became very annoying, try to change the melody line up a bit. And if you're going to make a loop, don't have it fade over, that's just asking for the song to grow corny in a video game and people realize it is a loop. Work on it looping over well.

KJLOPIK2007 responds:

Thanks I'll keep that in mind =]

[Beach.Relaxation]

Sort of relaxing.

I think you're definitely going in the right direction here Victor, but the song doesn't loop over well, and some of the sounds got repetitive - meaning unwanted and most people will probably mute the song if you include it in one of your games. The french horn(?) for the last four seconds was musically displaced, either keep it repetitive or move in a whole different direction with it, like adding a new instrument or something.

Still, I liked it,
Pho