Too short.
The song was way to short to even begin to critique. Although, if this was the beginning of a song, I'd say: Start with the bass, not the lead. Also, the lead and bass isn't quite enough to hold a song together, add some drums or something. I too am just trying to start using FL Studio (8) so don't feel bad, this was good for a first try. Don't forget making a longer song is as easy as repeating one beat with almost negligible variations.
thankyou. your review is very helpful and i shall take in your advice.
Hmm.
I thought the ending was horrible. The song didn't really build up, you added multiple instruments just playing at the same volume, tempo, too repetitive for trance. that was more like brainless shit that i would... well..
just work on it. make your music something people would be like "OMG MY ADRENALINE IS PUMPING"
Serene, indeed.
9/10, I think a few improvements here and there could be made but really it was spot on, try extending the length to keep the listener interested.
Now, set aside the serenity, if you really want to go for something jaw dropping, occasionally, add a few well placed crunchy guitar chords, that last maybe two beats, you know like a "dun dun". It's kinda hard to explain over a review, I hope you understand.
Great job!
no no, I kind of have an idea of what you mean. And to be absolutely honest I was contemplating it. But I couldn't seem to find a rhythm that would fit.
thank you though! :D
The lyrics. Yes.
I really enjoyed the song. The lyrics were great for freestyling. -2 stars for the silence, though I do understand that things happen - like your friend calling ur roomate... Nice to hear rap, a change from your techno/trance.
heheh this was all for fun, and I'm glad that you enjoyed it haha; D
HOT DAMN!
Without a doubt nubbinownz, you're my favorite author on NG. I could totally see this score being used on one of them old 8 bit arcade plane shooter games.
favorite ? <3 awwww I feel so squishy inside right now. Thank you !
Proper good job mate.
It really sounds like something I'd hear at a (night) club or rave. Kudos for this being your first proper song. Sometimes I found there was so much going on in the song it was hard to listen to, so maybe try not to cram in as much music as you can but rather make the most of the sounds you do include.
kewlll thanks for the review, i think it was more because some of the sounds clashed a bit. - my bad.
other then that i reckon it would've been okay if i fixed the sounds and equalizers rather then not cramming it in?
Unique.
Sounds great Snak. You'd have a 10 in my book normally BUT... If you're looking to get your audio in some flash, make a song that won't get annoying after 10-20+ loops, unless the flash author is cool enough to use multiple songs :)
Otherwise, very, very good.
Thanks for the review, and thanks for the tip :D.
Hmm.
Was it really a battle between the bass and guitar? I can't imagine such a thing :)
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I never thought a song could be so good. And it never stopped getting better.
thank you pho. I enjoy your reviews more and more each time I see them :D
Kickass.
The song fits your comments well, nubblnownz.
Thank you photray. Eventually I'll put a guitar version of this song up there.
Rating your own audio is homo. It's even more homo if you blam it.
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